Monday, March 18, 2013

Disappearing Sample

On monday it was so hot and exciting that I was sweating like I haven’t sweat like this in my life. So I decided to go for a shower after when I was finished I said to myself should i go for a walk with jonathan? I ask my mum if I can go she said sure And I said thanks mum for letting me go. It was my first time in my life again. When I ask my mum if I could go She will say no but  I so so excited when she said yes coming out of her mouth.

So when I got out of the through the door and out I went runny to jonathan house to ask if he could come for a walk so the mum said to him if he want to come for walk he said with his awesome mouth yeah thanks for letting me go so he came runny though the house runny to the door and shouted it like he hasn’t gone for a walk in he life. I ask him if he has gone for a walk in his life he said to me of course I haven’t.

we went to the the beach to have a swim because it was hot as we got there we saw these to dogs having a fight I said to him lets go and find the owners they were swimming.
so this man came to stop it and called its dog to come so it came to him.

We went down to take our t-shirts off so we can go in as we went I just jump in and it was cold when I got down and came up I couldn’t see him swimming or jumping in so I said myself hes pomble just hiding from me but when I looked over to the sea I could see him saying help help so I ran to the same man with the dog and said my friend is drowning in the water can you help him please he said sure so he tried to get him but it looked like the water was disappearing from the sand and the man had disappeared and his dog to he was self because the water had disappeared so we ran back opened the door I said this man had disappeared but my mum wasn’t there  

has we went back to the beach and look if the water was still out but its was in and I saw the man standing with his dog and went back home to see if my mum was there and she just arrived when I got back I said to her where did you go I thought you have disappeared but she was standing up looking at me and said I just went to go do some shopping I said to myself thanks goodness you're back.

Independent Writing

Yesterday was awesome because we went to
the beach and I saw Logan and Lukis helping this man pick up white cardboard because they were swimming with the cardboard  “why are you picking up that I asked logan” that man

said to us to look at this bird that was dieing because what they were swimming with the cardboard that was poisoning the bird   .

Frankie:  Then we went to go jump into the water. I said ‘’ It was cold there were big waves crashing on the rocks from the big tug boat. as we were jumping off the rock. It was getting dark I said  to myself its dark so i said to Frankie i’m going home now bye and I said bye to auri too.

Abandoned House

This feels like a perfect day for a swim said lukis while Logan was riding his scooter on the path  around his house. “Lets go for a ride through the forest said lukis  logan said sure lets go.
Logan, Lukis was riding their own scooter through the forest   it look so creepy and scary as  they looked  over to there right then all of a sudden they saw an abandoned House.

The house had smashed windows with the bright light reflecting on it  rat died all over the place on the grass and it looked dark inside when the door was a little bit opened, woods broken,  “ Lukis said to Logan we should come here later to see what's inside their”.

After they came back to the abandoned house without their scooter they slowly walked up the steps and suddenly lukis walk on to one of the woods and it broke off so close said lukis when he nearly fell. As they walk through the door all they could hear is squeaky noises from inside It was SO SO dark that they couldn't see anything.

As he was inside the house with his eyes wide open he could see this light coming from the other side of the house  as he was looking at it he was running toward it he said to himself i wonder what's inside here.

He open it excitedly saying i found something it was a box of money he said to lukis lets leave this here and come back for it okay Said logan to lukis lukis said sure we can leave this here until we come back we will have to make sure no one finds this.

As they hid the money all they could hear something lukis was so scared they he was about to cry he ran at the back of logan and started to cry logan said to be quite so he can hear the noses he said to lukis it just some rats running pass and doors closing lukis said to him no it was something ales he was SO SO SO scared that he didn’t want to come back.

when lukis had stop crying they went back home though the creeping forest with rats died on the grass noises as they were nearly at the end all they could hear is lukis mum calling him. When he got home his mum said where have you