Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Jake The Swimmer

Jake was practising for the school semi finals. Jake had thought that he wasn't going to make it to the end. 
Emma gosh Ben Purr had said go faster, be in a speeding rhyme, and to ignore people. Then he had did it in a rhyme to make it to the end.When he got to the middle he felt like he was downing and it seemed to keep on going. When Mr Newman had to save him Jake had said you save me. When Gosh had said if I had thrown some of the fruit in your lane he would of chopped it up like a smoothie. 
When Jake had made it to the end he had felt his hand touch the wall he relies he had won the race.

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