Independent Writing

Yesterday was awesome because we went to
the beach and I saw Logan and Lukis helping this man pick up white cardboard because they were swimming with the cardboard  “why are you picking up that I asked logan” that man
said to us to look at this bird that was dieing because what they were swimming with the cardboard that was poisoning the bird   .


Frankie:  Then we went to go jump into the water. I said ‘’ It was cold there were big waves crashing on the rocks from the big tug boat. as we were jumping off the rock. It was getting dark I said  to myself its dark so i said to Frankie i’m going home now bye and I said bye to auri too.