tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1650190699933911504.post57378233441640034..comments2014-09-12T08:28:45.397+12:00Comments on Frankie: My WeekendPES Blogs Administratorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17359536147314284796noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1650190699933911504.post-90957316551132504932012-06-27T16:17:44.160+12:002012-06-27T16:17:44.160+12:00You did have a good day! No wonder you were tired....You did have a good day! No wonder you were tired.<br />I like the way you added detail so your reader knows exactly what you did, and what it was like from your point of view.<br />You wrote about a lot of topics:<br />Fearfall<br />Goldrush<br />The performance<br />Having a rest<br />Playing with the dogs<br />Playing on the computer....<br />All of these different ideas need to be in different paragraphs.Miss Gardenhttp://pesroom12and13.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com